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 ===== 39 Shards/Mind Control =====
-There are few aspects of the 4th age where the 39 shards does not have heavy influence.  A totalitarian alliance making extensive use of mind control, it is the primary villain in the post-Great War period since the evil gods will not directly make war now.
+There are few aspects of the 4th age where the 39 shards does not have at least some influence. A totalitarian alliance making extensive use of mind control, it is the primary villain in the post-Great War period since demons will not directly make war now.
 ===== Dragoons =====
-Dragoons are a newly created race, and are quickly gaining influence as savage warrior unconcerned with the struggle between the gods.
+Dragoons are a newly created race, and are quickly gaining influence as savage warrior unconcerned with the struggle of men and gods.
 ===== Anthegals =====
-By this time anthegals are securely their own race, yet it is not until late in the 4th age that Anthegalia becomes the walled garden where all anthegals reside.  Small communities of anthegals may exist elsewhere before this, though their isolationists culture is constant.
+By this time anthegals are securely their own race, yet it is not until late in the 4th age that Anthegalia becomes the walled garden where all anthegals reside. Small communities of anthegals may exist elsewhere before this, though their isolationists culture is constant. Dark Anthegals are similarly more common, and many royal houses find association with anthegal lineages (real or imagined) to gain legitimacy.