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--- polemos:suggestions [2023/09/21 23:04] – created Blake Anderton
+++ polemos:suggestions [2023/09/22 00:11] (current) – [Amerocentric] Blake Anderton
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 ==== True ====
-Polemos operates on the aspiration that the closer a story is to The Truth, the more engaging and timeless it will be.
+Polemos operates on the aspiration that the closer a story is to The Truth, the more interesting, engaging, and timeless it will be.
 Stories in Polemos are not intended to serve as propaganda or lecture the audience, but care should be taken that the fiction does not serve our delusions.
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 Namely - the blending of the reason of Athens, the faith of Jerusalem, and the confidence of Camelot.
-For this reason philosophies and placenames often use greek, hebrew, or old english words or word-plays.
+For this reason concepts, philosophies, spirit names, and place names often use Greek, Hebrew, or Old English words or word-plays.
+New languages that build upon the deep connections of these real-world inspirations (ala Tolkien) would have been preferrable, but this author lacks the education and time for such a noble undertaking.